Survival

goldfinch dazzles 
  in winter sun -
  hawk watches
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Dietrich Avatar
February 22, 2014 at 4:19 PM
This is great imagery and one of your best haiku.
Pettit Avatar
February 13, 2014 at 4:43 PM
In an altercation between the two, my money would be riding on the hawk. Good descriptive haiku.
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