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goldfinch dazzles in winter sun - hawk watches

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Date: 2/22/2014 4:19:00 PM
This is great imagery and one of your best haiku.
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Date: 2/13/2014 4:43:00 PM
In an altercation between the two, my money would be riding on the hawk. Good descriptive haiku.
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