Survival

The path narrowed till
Stepping on each others' toes
Was the way forward.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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February 25, 2012 at 11:01 AM
Nice write, but this is more of a "senryu" than a "haiku".
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February 27, 2012 at 11:14 AM
thanks! i had the number of syllables wrong i the first line, changed it now:)
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