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The bat is never satisfied, his eyes do pierce the longest gloom of Winter’s white. His dark decrepit cape— a purple vine. The brood of brows and lids release no light. 9/27/2020 Contest: Rithimus Divisa 7 Sponsor: Gregory Barden Original Name: THE BAT IS NEVER SATISFIED

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Date: 10/2/2020 9:51:00 AM
So creative and unique Kim. Congratulations on your winning placement.
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Date: 10/2/2020 6:29:00 AM
I'm back with congrats Kim. Another deserving win! Congratulations! Linda
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/2/2020 6:37:00 AM
Thank you, Linda!
Date: 9/28/2020 11:06:00 AM
Wonderfully done; my friends the bat accept your tribute and are grateful.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/28/2020 1:26:00 PM
LOL! Dark...
Date: 9/27/2020 7:44:00 AM
Good luck with the contest. I'm sure you chose a fine extract. ~~
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/27/2020 12:20:00 PM
Thank you, Victor!
Date: 9/27/2020 5:51:00 AM
Nice one Kim! Good luck with the contest. I'm off to read the original from which it was taken :) Linda
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/27/2020 12:20:00 PM
Thank you, Linda!

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