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Surrounding

Surround the irritation the painful thought the dull itch.. Ask that surrounding the identity of that which it surrounds.. Our real Self is thus exposed and touches the pain which now.. undisguised is found as One with infinite Self...

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Akham Nilabirdhwaja Singh

Date: 9/1/2016 4:55:00 AM

Nice work.

Neeti Tibrewala

Date: 8/31/2016 3:36:00 AM

Nice one. Since there is no about the poem section i thought it could be a little elaborative for better understanding.

Nilima Deb

Date: 8/30/2016 2:26:00 PM

nice write!

Holly Bohto

Date: 8/30/2016 2:14:00 PM

Writing like space expanding and then gravity suckling you back in. Or is it orbital motion that puts you mind inside the words of this comotion? Love the write.