Surrounded By Ghosts

She smiles as she looks at her photographs
and she isn't alone now,
as she lives in the past

written 4th September for Constance's Kimo contest
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Maverick Avatar
November 19, 2021 at 1:01 PM
Ah but we are never truly alone, the blind can See what is important, as this; seeing is from The soul!' which being without form, cannot be Mocked or dispersed, as it is spirit not flesh And is not truly part of the treadmill of Consumerisam'
Proxenos Avatar
September 23, 2021 at 7:37 AM
Jack this is so touching and I am so happy that you won - the sentiment in this poem is so awesome. hugs an blessings, Jennifer.
La France Avatar
September 8, 2021 at 9:00 PM
Jack, congratulations on your win in my Kimo Contest with your beautiful poem, well done ~ peace and tranquility _Constance
May Avatar
September 7, 2021 at 10:38 AM
Congrats on your win Jack
Agustin Avatar
September 7, 2021 at 4:25 AM
Congrats! Thanks for sharing this. God bless you.
Kendrick Avatar
September 7, 2021 at 3:05 AM
Back with congrats. Sara
Rodrigues Avatar
September 6, 2021 at 9:51 AM
Well-deserved congratulations!
Dietrich Avatar
September 6, 2021 at 7:58 AM
I like that she has their ghosts with her! Congrats on the win, Jack. (did I ever answer your last email??)
Allison Avatar
September 5, 2021 at 3:26 PM
excellent ink Jack , this one hits home hard! many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
Rodrigues Avatar
September 5, 2021 at 5:14 AM
Very nice
Kendrick Avatar
September 4, 2021 at 12:05 PM
Sad. So many people do that exact same thing. Enjoyed reading your contest entry. Reads like a good contender to me. Way to go. Thanks for all the visits to my page. Sara
Y. Avatar
September 4, 2021 at 10:32 AM
WoW! Jack, This is a good entry for the contest. I found it thought-provoking and profound. Best wishes in the contest. Thanks for stopping by my page. Have a great day and weekend:-) Alexis
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