Surrounded

Idk 
Surrounded by day
Alone at night
Without you
And idk why
you left me with
tears in eye
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June 3, 2025 at 9:59 PM
Hello, it's Jac your poem is nice although I have a Constructive Criticism, U know the "IDK" not very many people know that so I think it's best to write the whole thing. U know that's what I don't like in poetry, people needs to be smart, intelligent or educated. Pls don't be mad, I'm doing Constructive Criticism bcoz it's to be the best version of yourself. ~Jac I invite u to my poetrysoup hp and choose a poem to comment on, thanks
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