Surround By Darkness

always surround by darkness trying to find the light in this meanless life, where could i
get that sweet taste of light, where will i get my freedom, when all my dreams and hopes
will be finally realize, i just want to get out of this darkness, i just want to get a
life of happiness, is that so hard to find and get? can someone tell when my dark days
will be over? please i need you answer my call, come and help me, please before is too late...
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Brown Avatar
July 20, 2010 at 6:10 AM
Thank you for sharing your heartfelt poetry with us today Emilio. Love, Carol
Ortiz Avatar
July 19, 2010 at 9:39 AM
Very good Emilio, that's how you should take your inner feeling's out from your chest, grab pen and put down, wish you luck on everything!
A   Avatar
July 19, 2010 at 8:17 AM
there is much light here Emilio, keep writing away from darkness you will find it..Have a nice and wonderful day.-LeeAnn
Madera Avatar
July 19, 2010 at 8:08 AM
jejeje thanx im new on this so i try my best
Quintero Avatar
July 19, 2010 at 8:06 AM
Keep writing the light will come. Thanks for sharing - Jodie Q
Goodwin Avatar
July 19, 2010 at 8:03 AM
Nice piece of work!
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