Surrendering

Together, but yet lost and alone,
Wondering if you're going to be gone.
We use to love like there was no tomorrow,
But now all we have is sorrow.
I still dream of a special day,
When we will find our love of yesterday.
Longing for a forgotten hideaway all of our own,
Then I look into your eyes to see it gone.
I know most of the blame lies with me,
For not becoming the woman I should be.
You've showed me love I've never had,
I blame myself for it going bad.
I'm filled with such emotion,
But my love is filled with devotion.
You're my one and only true love,
So I'm surrendering our love on the wings of a Dove.
I'll be waiting to learn,
If our love will return.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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November 16, 2010 at 11:53 AM
Angela, congratulayions on having your poem featured this week.. here enjoying all featured poems. Have a nice day,..p.d.
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November 15, 2010 at 10:54 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week Angela. Love, Carol
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March 23, 2010 at 5:58 PM
Well they say to let it go and if its meant to be it will come back ... smile ... who knows, its all just an adventure anyway ... Thanks for bringing your talent to PoetrySoup, Angela and I look forward to reading more of your writing soon!
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February 18, 2010 at 9:07 AM
wow this was so sad! heartbreak is the worst! and i hope that your dove returns! this was a great piece with great imagery and feeling!=)Jo
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February 17, 2010 at 7:55 AM
Dear Angela, I find it hard to believe that YOU are the cause for THIS LOVE Going Bad YOUR Heart is to PURE YOUR LOVE to DEEP Superb and Vivid Imagery So glad YOU have joined the SOUP Family ALWAYS YOURS...HG
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February 15, 2010 at 5:16 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Angela. I also wish you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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February 14, 2010 at 5:46 PM
Welcome to the Poetry Soup Family of poets.. please continue to share your creative writes with us all .. as this delight tonight.. luv.. Linda-Marie "Sweetheart" of Poetry Soup..
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