Surrendered
When the sun touched your face,
You smiled,
When the rain fell upon,
You sheltered,
When the stars lit the sky,
You saw,
When the clouds drank the moon,
You knew,
When the time sped away,
You rested,
When the night took you in
You went,
To some better place
You aspired
In the sweet arms of angels
Surrendered…
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