Surrender Thy Soul To My Body Part 1

Make love to me oh my habibi
speak in your motion and deeds
swear in desire plus sensation ya habibi
that am the queen who awakes your needs.
 
Let the wild fire in your dark eyes
whisper of thy want and passion
let your heart clarify no more lies
that its rhythm and beat are only for my satisfaction.
 
Because baby am lost.
Between all the fighting and blame  
it feels like our love has frost
Only can't figure out what in this game
does scare and sadden me most  
between being without you just me
or living with you at any cost.
 
Surrender thy soul is my body's  plea
my feel and texture is on your decree
No restrictions my king
testify in any position you please to swing.
 
Seal my doubts silence my insecurities
be profound remind me with sheer inequity
why i felt safe enough to show you all my faults and imperfect specialties
why i let down my guard made you my shield and let you lead my equity.
 
awaken those emotions,the notions we felt on conception of our love
once again let this four walls,the neighbors,and velvet of the night
certify that we are shameless,scoundrels and every other wicked word above
when it comes to our fantasies and pleasure we don't care of any other sight.

(CHECK OUT PART 2 TO COMPLETE THIS EXOTIC TALE)

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 4/21/2014 3:00:00 AM
Thanks Eileen?You changed your photo?am i right?lovely!!! Thank you!!! Check out part two too!!! xoxoxo!!!!
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Date: 4/21/2014 2:18:00 AM
This is very sensual and sweet...Habibi, eh? Oh...there is a secret to be discovered. I love that term of endearment as it is often spoken here...Lovely write of desire, need, and passion
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