Surrender

Those wicked looks you give me, those crazy things you say,
Would melt any other girls heart into disarray.
But we all know I’m not some kind of fool and will only lead the way,
If what is waiting for us is some freaky catnip play.
I will ball you up just like a woollen swab,
And chase you around like some deranged Domme .
Whether you have been naughty, whether you have been nice, 
There would be no safe word to rescue you tonight. 
Just the imprint of my hand and the echo of its sound, 
Leading the way to our imprisoned playground.
Hush now, don’t make a sound, 
Just keep on purring hard into the ground.
Wriggle and squirm right into my palm, 
To set the night alight with your futile gnawing call.
I won’t relent, I will not pause, 
Not until you fully surrender to my waiting claws.
Come now don’t be shy, 
Be a good girl and I promise I won’t make you cry........
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012


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Date: 5/23/2012 6:01:00 AM
Oooo...this is interesting. I like what you've done here.
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Aimee Garside
Date: 5/23/2012 11:33:00 AM
Thank you for the visit and comment ~hugs~ Aimee
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