Surrender

As she lay back on the bed
She gave herself away 
With hands pinned to the bed
It was time to blow her mind away 

In between the strokes she'd grasp for air
It's like she was drowning in the moment 
Cause with every stroke she'd exclaim
And you could hear her call for her Savior 

I don't know if she's that religious
Or its because I got her seeing heaven
Cause her head is in the clouds her eyes closed
And both her lips are moist and warm 

The bed is steady with my flow
And all the sounds are slurping
And clapping of cheeks
And the room now wafts our passion 

In between the sways of the hip
And the magical dance we've been into
We in flow that even if our phones ring
No one is picking cause we already tied up 

When we both out of breath 
She'll rest by my chest
And draw up how I made her feel in the inside
As she describes all the spots I hit right 

And when the night slowly wanes away
We'd go a few more times
Till I put her to sleep when she smiles
Cause that's when I know she's had enough 

The PO£T

Copyright © | Year Posted 2023



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