Michael Degenhardt Poet Quatrain

Surrender

Upon a moonlit night of true surrender
Two lovers bask, within the glow of love, so new
Where nature offers well, a night of splendor
As untamed hearts are captured and subdued

Hands, eyes and mouths, they explore each other
Their offering to themselves is love, divine
As the fire, it burns on to never smother
While tempest hearts make two souls intertwine

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Brian Strand July 30, 2008 at 11:59 PM Fine writing from a fine poet Michael.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments

Vince Suzadail Jr. July 30, 2008 at 9:30 AM Nothing like romance to enhance a life. Vince

Gregory Golden July 30, 2008 at 8:38 AM A superbly written poem, with imagery and tone. I like the way you paint with word. Poem bask in pastel colors, demonstrates mood and flow. Indeed, great artistic writing. Keep thinking outside the box. Remember that imagery encompasses the five senses. Poetry is plain simple and true. Keep sharing

Anne Christine July 30, 2008 at 7:52 AM Beautiful and steamy. You kept my attention. I loved it! Anne-Marie Christine