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Surrender

The dyed bamboo of Chinese finger traps Should have taught me everything To strive is to cut through jungle To surrender is to know I am jungle

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 12/21/2018 9:24:00 PM
Congrats in the contest. Well done! Welcome to Poetry Soup.
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Date: 12/21/2018 6:12:00 PM
wow GREAT ending!! Congrats in the contest.
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Lee Cox
Date: 12/21/2018 8:32:00 PM
Thanks!
Date: 12/21/2018 5:38:00 AM
Lovely, Lee. Congrats on your podium finish.
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Lee Cox
Date: 12/21/2018 8:31:00 PM
Thank you!
Date: 12/20/2018 4:25:00 PM
Congratulations, nice Chinese philosophy.
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