Surrender

In total surrender with passion on fire,
Drinking of Love’s Wine, sweet desire,
We come together in Love that’s true,
Bonding and blending into one from two...

As our eyes meet, our lips touch,
Our arms surround, each other clutch.
As touching progresses to places forbidden,
Passion is stirred, desire unhidden.
Little by little we each explore,
Wandering and roaming more and more.

In our adventure of Love we discover anew,
What triggers more heat to boil our brew.
A brew that's made from pure emotion,
Distilled by Love, a potent potion.

As we dwell and linger in zones of pleasure,
Composing Love's music measure by measure.
His pleasure is mine I seek to fulfill.
My pleasure is his, the root of his will.

Our hearts beat with rhythm and rhyme,
Two beating as one, keeping the time.
Ever increasing, growing more intense,
Are the swells of passion now immense.
For to be the Union of Love, complete and whole,
Fused must be our body, heart, mind, and soul.

With our flames of desire out of control,
Wildly leaping from soul to soul,
They mingle and mix, unite into one,
The pinnacle of passion has now begun.
As ecstasy erupts, all energy's depleted,
Two hearts now fused, Surrender completed.

Written by Artsieladie/Sharon Donnelly
©2014-04-21 19:07:00 (EST) 
All rights reserved.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018



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Date: 4/27/2018 5:42:00 PM
A beautiful sensual done tastefully to and finish climatically! My compliments!
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Artsieladie Sharon Donnelly
Date: 4/27/2018 9:58:00 PM
Thank you, Ralph, for reading and giving me your feedback. It teases the fine line between tasteful and not, but doesn't cross it. All the best to you. :) ~ Artsie
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