Surreal Nature

Surreal Nature
	
	
Rural Oklahoma: Cool autumn night on the front porch, thoughts and opinions about poetry and painting shared with a dear friend over wine and water. Poetry is sacred she said, and painting is my inner life. Painting was once my wild mind, I replied, but poetry’s now my amateur art.
	
				moon’s half-darkness...
				shy in its suit of light
				shadows of pines
	
	
Three “yips,” almost unnoticed. Coyotes she said, tricksters in authentic guise playing their night games. A cow’s bawl close by, in a moment silenced by a contrapuntal victory chorus, soprano and tenor voices singing to the darkness in celebration of success – a kill.
	
				moon behind clouds
				balance... the meaning of
				beauty & death
	
	
	Written 10.08.2013
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Guzzi Avatar
December 3, 2013 at 7:00 PM
I enjoyed reading your verse this evening, especially the prose. Light & Love
Jordan Avatar
December 3, 2013 at 8:16 PM
Thanks for your kind comments... Jack
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October 25, 2013 at 4:58 PM
Congrats on your winning work..Way to go!!!Sara
Jordan Avatar
October 25, 2013 at 6:08 PM
Thank you, Sara... Jack
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October 25, 2013 at 10:45 AM
Hi Jack,, awesome Haibun. Have yourself a sweet day.......... LOVE SKAT .
Jordan Avatar
October 25, 2013 at 12:43 PM
I think it will be a good day. Itr started well anyway... Jack
A   Avatar
October 25, 2013 at 9:55 AM
congratulations Jack... always~ PD
Jordan Avatar
October 25, 2013 at 12:42 PM
Thanks, Linda... Jack
Hamilton Avatar
October 25, 2013 at 7:41 AM
Jack very good congrats on a fine win Shadow x smile
Mehta Avatar
October 25, 2013 at 5:04 AM
Congrats on the win in the contest, Jack
Richards Avatar
October 24, 2013 at 8:51 PM
This poem hits home to me......we can hear the cows, and from our front porch, the song of the coyote keeps us company. We too are rural.....and this is where we find the balance between beauty, and death. What a beauty this poem is. (I would have placed it higher)....:)
Jordan Avatar
October 24, 2013 at 11:44 PM
Thanks for the wonderful reply. This was memorable for me because I'm a city boy who was visiting coyote country. A magic experience... Jack
Adams Avatar
October 24, 2013 at 8:47 PM
excellent haibun...love your descriptiveness and the haikus were perfect! Congrats on your win
Jordan Avatar
October 24, 2013 at 11:42 PM
Thank you, Sandra... Jack
Lamoureux Avatar
October 24, 2013 at 6:12 PM
This is not the work of an amateur Jack, congratulations.
Jordan Avatar
October 24, 2013 at 11:42 PM
Thank you for the compliment, Richard... Jack
Jones Avatar
October 17, 2013 at 6:35 PM
I could actually picture myself right there with you...hearing and seeing this.....maybe I heard the same coyotes....:-) ...they are both haunting and beautiful....gotta love our state!!!!!
Jordan Avatar
October 17, 2013 at 9:54 PM
It was a magic experience, one of those, "I'll never forget..." events... Jack
Hamilton Avatar
October 12, 2013 at 6:02 AM
Jack this is sooo good love it Shadow x smile
Jordan Avatar
October 12, 2013 at 8:25 AM
Thanks for the compliment, Shadow... Jack
Adams Avatar
October 11, 2013 at 6:15 PM
this is an awesome haibun...cleverly crafted....enjoyed this one :)
Jordan Avatar
October 11, 2013 at 6:20 PM
Thanks, Sandra. It's essentially my first haibun... jack
Farley Iv Avatar
October 11, 2013 at 1:37 PM
Love it. Original and well versed. -Patrick Farley IV
Jordan Avatar
October 11, 2013 at 3:04 PM
Thank you, Patrick. I appreciate the comment... Jack
Tacito Avatar
October 9, 2013 at 9:19 AM
This was uplifting & deep for me. You seriously created this atmospheric surrealism with such ease. One of your best, yet...
Jordan Avatar
October 9, 2013 at 9:34 AM
Thanks for reading and commenting, Drake... Jack
Onclaud Avatar
October 8, 2013 at 8:39 PM
lovely introspection with great insights about friendship-bonding and life's treasures, jack...beautiful phrasing all the way!..:) huggs
Jordan Avatar
October 8, 2013 at 9:54 PM
Thanks as always, Nette. It's good to hear rom you. Jack
Andresen Avatar
October 8, 2013 at 3:12 PM
- Proficient as always, Jack !!! Love it !!!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :))))
Jordan Avatar
October 8, 2013 at 4:39 PM
Thanks, as always... Jack
Matose Avatar
October 8, 2013 at 1:55 PM
Jack, I almost see the picture in the dark, in your rural Oklahoma! Your last three short lines are a true philosophy! Keep it up. JM
Jordan Avatar
October 8, 2013 at 2:12 PM
Thanks for the comment, Joseph... Jack
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