SURREAL

Surreal love like a blow on the face of the moon
A lukewarm romance in a gloomy afternoon 
Like a dust soaked in drop of rain 
Like a mist from sunshine on the window pane 

A kind of love you could not understand 
Sometimes a peril, sometimes a helping hand 
Something that gave someone a breath 
But also wishes for his death 

A love that curses someone to destruction 
But also prays for his redemption 
A love that talked too sharp like sword 
But faded suddenly without a word 

A love that's gone silently forever 
When near was dawn of a sunny weather
A love that cared for much waters to flow 
But forgot to care for the blood to glow 


Sanctuary, Soft, Stir, Surreal Words poetry contest 
3rd place
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La France Avatar
March 9, 2024 at 2:34 PM
Roger, congratulations on your win in my contest, wonderful poem, blessings, Constance
Roger  Avatar
March 9, 2024 at 11:09 PM
Thank you very much dear...
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