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SURREAL

Surreal love like a blow on the face of the moon A lukewarm romance in a gloomy afternoon Like a dust soaked in drop of rain Like a mist from sunshine on the window pane A kind of love you could not understand Sometimes a peril, sometimes a helping hand Something that gave someone a breath But also wishes for his death A love that curses someone to destruction But also prays for his redemption A love that talked too sharp like sword But faded suddenly without a word A love that's gone silently forever When near was dawn of a sunny weather A love that cared for much waters to flow But forgot to care for the blood to glow Sanctuary, Soft, Stir, Surreal Words poetry contest 3rd place

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Date: 3/9/2024 2:34:00 PM
Roger, congratulations on your win in my contest, wonderful poem, blessings, Constance
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R. B. Cawis
Date: 3/9/2024 11:09:00 PM
Thank you very much dear...

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