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Surprising Snow White

Snow White’s vain and wicked stepmother
And her weakling of a father
Forced her with seven dwarfs to live
Whom all her love and attention she’d give
She’d love to get the jewels they’d bring
And wore them round her neck on the string
But when the prince kissed her and woke
She agreed to ride away with the bloke
But soon she started terribly to miss
The seven dwarfs who were such bliss
She remembered the days she would lie around
While the dwarfs would clean up without a sound
She longed for the love of seven men
Who’d keep her well fed in their den
So back she came with a lot of joy
With a promise to soon return for her baby boy

Inspiried by the fairy tale-Snow White and the seven Dwarfs.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 12/8/2010 5:21:00 AM
I am reading some very amazing and diverse poetry this morning. I am glad yours was among the poetry I was able to read today. Thank you for sharing your writing with us Tahera. Wishing you and yours a wonderful Holiday Season. Love,Carol
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Date: 12/7/2010 11:47:00 PM
EXCELLENT! Great take on John's contest, Tahera. If I had seven men waiting on me all day, why would I want to leave? I think John will get a kick out of this. It's just what he wanted. I haven't posted my entry yet but probably will tomorrow. Best wishes for a big win! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 12/7/2010 8:37:00 PM
What an interesting twist to Snow White, Tahera-- she sure is lucky that the 7 dwarfs are always there for her--enjoyed reading this one and wishing you all the best in the contest :) -- nikko :)
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Date: 12/7/2010 8:37:00 PM
Love it..........laugh!
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Date: 12/7/2010 8:23:00 PM
Fairy Tale with a twist Tahera.. enjoyable and a great update from the classic tale luv.. one of my favs .. enjoyed this romantic trip my friend.. with luv..
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