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Surprising Hugg

I got out off the cab to say goodby
uncertain of the surprise waiting me byy
she jumped on me and tightly she hugged
like spider she was and i felt like a bug
 
her fragrance was mild and yet it was firm
tht maroon coat warm and body beneath stubborn
weather was cold but my breath so hot
her arms across my back were holding me on
 
that grip was so tite it was hard for me to breath
that moment was so emotional my heart forgot to beat
she was so close to me as she could ever be
for those 10 seconds my whole world was at freez
 
that time was precious i couldnot let her go
we were onto each other like body and sole
her hairs brushed against my lips tickling my nose
making me laugh and all the sadness was gone
 
i love you she said breathing the same air
her lips touching my cheek she said take care
i love you too and a kiss my lips guided to her ear
i wished to look in her eyes and see if there were tears
 
i stood there watching her as she walked away
leaving me behind i felt my sole was about to decay
she didn,t looked back it made me so sad
but till now it was the best hugg i ever had

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Beata Agustin

Date: 12/27/2023 2:28:00 AM

Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.

Skat A

Date: 5/4/2016 11:41:00 AM

Mahnoor Riaz Khan, I'm just here visiting your poem once again. If you ever return to post, I'd like to come back to read your newest. Happy Days **SKAT**