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Surprise, Surprise, Vaporise

A chain fails at its weakest link Look for attachments, cause of fear Mirroring desire, find these chinks Once free, boundless bliss within spears Let us now shift, into high gear A chain fails at its weakest link Surrender lets God, our life steer Whilst ego cravings make us sink Breeze with ease, at illusions wink In this dream world, let our peers leer A chain fails at its weakest link Disappear; there is no one here Save throb of love, hold nothing dear Rest oh hermit, bliss nectar drink When God draws near, all becomes clear A chain fails at its weakest link 29-June-2021
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Buhagiar Avatar
June 29, 2021 at 12:58 AM
This is a great quatern. we are sure to get all the races God wants us to receive.
Seeker Avatar
June 29, 2021 at 1:08 AM
How are you doing, Victor?
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