Surprise, Surprise
September, the third,
gifts, awaiting my lover.
Time tails, until 'noon,
surprising her, surprised me ~
set plans overpowered mine.
20 September 2022
'Remember September' Poetry Contest
Sponsored by Andrea Dietrich
Form: Tanka, 57577 syllable count
Copyright © Izintombi Zamambo | Year Posted 2022
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