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Surprise Find

Cold morning in march rainstorm
Bed or baby mice found in garage
Huddled siblings start naming them



Wordku: 5-7-5 words

AP: Honorable Mention 2025
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Wolf Avatar
November 16, 2025 at 8:16 PM
I guess newborn mice are still 'cute.' They're not ready to cause grow women to stand on stairs and shriek. lol.
Gauthier Avatar
November 16, 2025 at 8:35 PM
They're only cute because they don't move ~ lol
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