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On old woman's chimes
May be rusty, but they still
Ring once in a while.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Smith Avatar
July 19, 2012 at 4:31 AM
Thank you Carol. I appreciate your comment, as always.
Brown Avatar
July 18, 2012 at 8:51 AM
Congratulations on your poem making it through round one of the PoetrySoup International Poetry Contest. I wish you the best in the finals E. J. Love, Carol
Smith Avatar
July 16, 2012 at 2:59 PM
I'm her steel wool. Thanksfir making me laugh.
Austin Avatar
November 25, 2011 at 9:09 AM
Old men's too! Congrats on the selection. Enjoyed. Old daver
Smith Avatar
November 24, 2011 at 6:19 AM
Thank you Carol.
Brown Avatar
November 23, 2011 at 10:40 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved poem being featured this week E.J. Love, Carol
Smith Avatar
November 22, 2011 at 12:14 PM
Thanks Michael. EJ
Smith Avatar
November 22, 2011 at 7:57 AM
Made laugh thank you for this treat.
Smith Avatar
November 22, 2011 at 6:01 AM
Thank you Dr. Mehta!
Smith Avatar
November 22, 2011 at 6:01 AM
Judith Meyer: sorry about the comma in the wrong place! Thanks again!
Mehta Avatar
November 21, 2011 at 5:30 PM
Congratulations on your poem being featured this week, EJ
Smith Avatar
November 21, 2011 at 3:04 PM
Thanks so much, Judith
Meyer Avatar
November 21, 2011 at 12:54 PM
::Grin:: I like it. Congratulations on your featured work.
Suzadail Jr. Avatar
September 25, 2011 at 1:36 PM
When there's snow on the roof, there is usually a fire in the furnace. Vince
Smith Avatar
September 4, 2011 at 6:50 AM
Great play on words. I hope someone chimes in...
Merryman Avatar
September 2, 2011 at 8:15 PM
Such a clever tongue in cheek! I like it. Sincerely, Kim
Brown Avatar
September 2, 2011 at 2:01 PM
I enjoyed reading your poetry today E.J. I hope you have a wonderful weekend. Love, Carol
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