Notes About The Poem
10.05 am Sept. 29, 2025

Surprise
Docile to a pull of hands
Wondering what’s under the sun
As blind-folded eyes haunt
Each forwarded step counts-
Came the revelation!
Hugging tearfully, I thanked.
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