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Keep it short and clear. Merely stating the feelings. The magic of speech Has seductive ring to it. Meet someone who is in grief.

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Caren Krutsinger

Date: 3/22/2021 1:42:00 AM

Your tanka is sound, as is everything you write my friend.

Sotto Poet
Date: 3/22/2021 11:33:00 AM

Hello Caren, thanks for your wonderful encouraging words.

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 3/20/2021 7:39:00 AM

Hello Lasaad Tayeb, yes when someone is in grief it is best to keep the speech short. So nice to meet you. Enjoy your day my friend.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 3/20/2021 3:19:00 PM

Hello Lasaad Tayeb, yes emotions do carry us to different phases. Thank you Lasaad. Enjoy your evening my friend.

Sotto Poet
Date: 3/20/2021 8:41:00 AM

Emotions do, therefore, carry one to various phases. It's a privilege to know a brilliant poet, Darlene; blessings and best wishes

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/18/2021 4:18:00 PM

Those in grief can possibly really be wanting human contact. And then this is so true!

Sotto Poet
Date: 3/18/2021 6:46:00 PM

Thanks for your feedback Andrea, In general, the more people we interact with during these hard times, the more closely we interact with them, and the longer that interaction, the higher our risk of getting and spreading COVID-19. Take care, Andrea.