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I told her how I felt I told her what I think I told her how in every way her love was there to sync I waited for an answer I waited for a blink I waited for another chance to tell her I'm a link I told her I'm not lucky I told her I'm not wise I told her that I loved the way she came to be surprise

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Date: 2/4/2020 9:17:00 PM
Fun poem, Trevor.
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Trevor Mcleod
Date: 2/5/2020 8:34:00 AM
Thanks Line. I write so few fun poems. I have to get less serious. Trying to get original ideas down means posting the negative ones with the positive. A consequence of growth for an artist I think. Trevor

Book: Shattered Sighs