Trevor Mcleod Poet Quatrain

Surprise

I told her how I felt
I told her what I think
I told her how in every way
her love was there to sync

I waited for an answer
I waited for a blink
I waited for another chance
to tell her I'm a link

I told her I'm not lucky
I told her I'm not wise
I told her that I loved the way
she came to be surprise

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Line Gauthier February 4, 2020 at 9:17 PM Fun poem, Trevor. Trevor Mcleod February 5, 2020 at 8:34 AM Thanks Line. I write so few fun poems. I have to get less serious. Trying to get original ideas down means posting the negative ones with the positive. A consequence of growth for an artist I think. Trevor