John Beam Poet Haiku

Surpassing Meadow

Weather’s fairer stance                                                                                              
Rooted firm midst brokenness                                                                                     
Drifting placid blues

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Linda-Marie Sweetheart April 17, 2010 at 2:12 PM Congrats John on your winning poem in Raul's contest.. amazing words for the photo and a wonderful win for u to so enjoy...luv.. "Sweetheart"

Carolyn Devonshire April 17, 2010 at 1:07 PM A magnificent description of the photo, John. Congrats on your contest success! Love, Carolyn

Raul Moreno April 17, 2010 at 12:04 PM John, congrats on your placement in my contest...Raul

Andrea Dietrich April 16, 2010 at 10:37 PM Very lovely haiku. You were in an accident recently? Don't you hate that? LUv, Andrea

Dr.Ram Mehta April 16, 2010 at 8:55 PM A fine haiku. I enjoyed it