Surgery and Religion

Surgery 
I sat on the bed in the hospital bed, dressed in a new pajama-
shiny and with dragons on-my wife had bought just for this 
hospitalization, reading a newspaper, the surgeon came in, 
said halloo told me his team was the best, reassuring smile 
told me not to worry. A girl, in blue came, served me soup 
and there was a sign on my bed that the patient should have 
no breakfast. Triple bypass I struggled to think of something 
grim like the hereafter and god, but was more alarmed about 
this stupid war in Iraq.  At dawn they gave me a pill, I read 
a poem I had written about Marilyn Monroe which I liked; 
then of for hours I was suspended in dreamless nothingness. 
When I awoke I had lost the last trace of any religious beliefs.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Collins Avatar
April 19, 2012 at 7:17 AM
Jan -- I do remember your poem for Marilyn. I remember the dying one was funny. I think there was more than one. Sorry you can't find it. I checked the two anthologies I have from Bewrite, but no luck. I remember the site got complicated and I gave up submitting anything. They did publish my book and it was fun to work with Caitlyn. This is more than one bridge you've burned (Marcia). It doesn't seem you've turned lachrymal but maybe a little acrimonious. love, Kathy
Bauer Avatar
April 18, 2012 at 12:19 PM
i like this one. very descriptive and real with a perfect ending.
Hansen Avatar
April 18, 2012 at 1:04 PM
thank you iLene
Collins Avatar
April 18, 2012 at 10:30 AM
Hi Jan - I'm hoping this is about your surgery several years back. I loved the soup line. Be healthy. lvoe, Kathy
Hansen Avatar
April 18, 2012 at 11:59 AM
not acrimonious but lachrymal
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April 18, 2012 at 11:45 AM
you remember...Kathy, I wrote a poem about Marilyn "If I should Die" I think it was published in in a collection from bewrite anthology but i have forgotten the poem Interseting thing about Bewrite they do not take in anymore of my stuff, I think i was unruly one night and told them where to go...and bewrite has a long memory
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