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Permission given by a friend to use her photo 11/9/202

Surge of Autumn

emerald grass sea
hearken the far off mountain
leaves nestled in tide

Kim Rodrigues © 11/9/2020

Copyright © Kim Rodrigues | Year Posted 2020

autumnnaturehaiku

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November 25, 2020 at 8:05 AM

Hello Kim, You have created a very apt seasonal work. The imagery and sentiments are excellent. I wish to thank you for the first place podium medal in your challenging contest and for reading my submission. Warm regards Howard

Caren Krutsinger

November 14, 2020 at 7:19 PM

Gorgeouslypenned Kim

November 15, 2020 at 5:37 AM

Thank you, Caren!

November 11, 2020 at 9:46 PM

I love this tribute to the (now) world-renowned 'Sea of Leaves.' (--somewhere over the rainbow near the Sea of Reeds!) ~ The Covidly Lion

November 12, 2020 at 1:50 PM

Love it! Thanks for allotting me a smile!

W. Blaine Wheeler

November 11, 2020 at 6:01 PM

This is a well-written haiku with good choice of imagery

November 12, 2020 at 1:51 PM

Thank you, Blaine!

Newton Ranaweera

November 11, 2020 at 4:51 PM

Such a beautiful scene, Kim!!

November 11, 2020 at 5:35 PM

Thank you, my friend!

November 11, 2020 at 12:20 PM

I love this; very descriptive and colorful. Thama Logan

November 11, 2020 at 5:31 PM

Thank you, Thama!

Panagiota Romios

November 10, 2020 at 3:56 AM

Fantastic as always, Kim! Panagiota x

November 10, 2020 at 4:12 AM

Thank you, Pangie! :)

November 9, 2020 at 7:40 PM

Hi Kim, Your chosen words meshed well the photo. I liked what I saw. Best wishes in the contest. Enjoy your evening:-) Alexis

November 10, 2020 at 4:11 AM

Thank you, Alexis!

November 9, 2020 at 7:11 AM

Lovely choice of words to create vivid imagery..

November 9, 2020 at 7:23 AM

Thank you! I was inspired by this lovely photo! Have a blessed day!

Regina Mcintosh

November 9, 2020 at 5:37 AM

Beautiful... I love fall so much

November 9, 2020 at 6:31 AM

Me too! Love Autumn!

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