Surfing Your Way
An evening breeze lonely thoughts flowed,
From my deepest core branching westwards
Water skipping across moonlit ocean aglow
An evening breeze. Lonely thoughts! - flowed
Ripples of silver hues oscillating slow
Stimulating a coupling of mystical words
An evening breeze lonely thoughts flowed
From my deepest core branching westwards!
This poem uses the Triolet style --a stanza poem of 8 lines, following the rhythm of ABaAabAB. The first, fourth and seventh lines are identical, as are the second and final lines (Source: Wikipedia).
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