James Horn Poet Haiku

Surfing On West Coast Is Best

Surfing on West Coast Is Best

He was such a shrimp
Known by others as a wimp
On things liked to skimp.

He had saved so much
With reality lost touch
Started dating Dutch.

Nothing was his treat
Money never did deplete
Saving seemed so sweet.

This want to suggest
West is where surfing's the best
First with toe should test.

It probably will be colder than 
hell which really should be hot
So go ahead and give it a shot
Before in bed you just may rot.

Jim Horn
Dad of a West Coast Surfer.

PS. Need a subject for surfing
and even about serfs if they 
want to. There once were serfs
serving time for surfing in the 
wrong place. Wow. Wrote a poem
about that.

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