Jack Ellison Poet Limerick

Surfing In Hawaii

In spite of the snow, in spite of the cold
I'll be surfing in Hawaii, such joy untold
Well maybe in dreams
Hear girlies cute screams
Dreams, my friends are much richer than gold

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DM Babbit April 5, 2016 at 2:45 PM I get so much accomplished in my dreams. That includes surfing, skiiing and who knows what else. Nice write. Jack Ellison April 5, 2016 at 4:51 PM Uh... (d)reams!!! LOL Jack Ellison April 5, 2016 at 3:48 PM I'm an amazing Adonis known the world over... in my reams!!! LOL

Tim Smith April 5, 2016 at 11:51 AM You'll be out there hanging ten...soaking in the rays and then....chase the cuties....not the fruities...in a couple years you'll be sayin, I remember when Jack Ellison April 5, 2016 at 2:27 PM Glorious days ahead!!!!!!!!!