Surface Tension

I can feel the surface tension clinging on,
Pulling me back.
But when I slowly slip under the water,
It all feels the same.
If I wasn't looking,
I'd never even realize I was submerged.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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July 15, 2022 at 10:10 PM
Powerful poem….I like it! Debx
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