Notes About The Poem

As the sun dips towards the horizon, it casts a splendid palette of warm hues across the sky, mirrored in the calm waters of the river. Flocks of birds take flight in a graceful dance, seemingly celebrating the day's end. The silhouettes of reeds and trees on the banks frame this serene scene, a moment of natural beauty that conjures a sense of peace and reflection.

Surface

The surface of the lake, a polished glass, reflects the waiting sky.
Barely a ripple breathes until it passes, begs in want, silence rose the reply.

Hidden reeds where a tune unfurls, a sleepy song of water kisses the stone,
as it was born in the ancient world, a transient, deep, harmonic, and internal tone.

Bliss is the sound that essence hears, soothingly ponders, when there is nothing left to crave;
hence, the slow erosion of all the fears, bathes in the murmur of a hidden wave.

A dulcet splendor embraces the tamed life, in want of a vibrant flare,
while gathering semblances of their former slept source, spirits touch a gleaming care.

It is only with the heart that one can see rightly; what is essential is invisible to the eye,
still of that quiet water, so clear, so deep, the soul finds promises it meant to keep, reasons why?
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Goldsmith Avatar
October 22, 2025 at 2:13 PM
Your "Surface" is a wonderful write with a pretty picture. I enjoyed reading it. Wish I had that picture... "Good Luck" If for a contest. Have a wonderful day writing away...............
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
October 23, 2025 at 3:51 PM
I appreciate the sentiments, truly from the heart, my friend. There were great pics, but they turned out to be small gems, too, but I landed this beaut. Aloha.
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