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Supplication Beneath a Summer Sky

Supplication Beneath a Summer Sky

As far as the eye can see,
Where water and sky meet,
Lies that distant shore
Of sand to forest;
I encroach forthwith.

Blessèd be God’s creativity,
And welcome me
With benevolence
To an undeserved rest
At my journey’s end.

Where now I sulk in shame
For claiming independence;
Through wanton squabbles,
I find I’m not invincible,
Nor do I wish to remain mortal.

Take me for who I am:
My mind—unstable,
My character—questionable,
My wants—excessive,
My hope—forgiveness.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Baker Avatar
September 14, 2023 at 4:07 PM
A craving to be accepted for who we are is constant until we become aware of who we really are as our authentic self; then all desire has no meaning. Thanks for sharing your thoughts and feelings through your poetry, Dennis. Write ON! Bill
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September 17, 2023 at 10:24 AM
Words of wisdom Bill. Nicely put. Thank you for commenting. Take care.
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