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Supper at Sea

Snapping it up with so much zeal The shiny black shag with its slinky eel. The sand eel squirmed and slipped back to the sea. The shag said stop, please stay with me! You want to eat me said the edible eel. I do not want to be your meal. I see you swim under the sea At speeds much faster than slithering me. You will swallow me whole. And then where will I be? In my belly, of course, said the shag smilingly!

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Date: 11/12/2024 1:24:00 AM
Brilliant, congratulations
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Beau Barberis
Date: 11/12/2024 3:42:00 AM
Thank you!
Date: 11/7/2024 1:38:00 PM
Congratulations Beau on your first place in the contest.
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Beau Barberis
Date: 11/7/2024 11:17:00 PM
Thanks very much. It was fun to write and inspired by a real life event. I watched a shag eat a sand eel in the U.K. (after many attempts!)
Date: 10/24/2024 3:37:00 PM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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