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              Contest : Pick a Title - Volume 44 - Surpine, Looking At The Sky                               Form: Swap Quatrain.   Sponsor: Edward Ibeh     Date : 21st May 2024

Supine, Looking At The Sky

Melancholy thoughts surround me, as I gaze into the galaxy. Tonight the moon casts deepest shadows over me. The universe encompasses so much of your energy, As I gaze into the galaxy, melancholy thoughts surround me. We were always together you and me, I the clown, you so wise. The twinkling stars remind me of your bright eyes. I look deeply into the universe, its visions of you, I see. I the clown, you so wise, we were always together you and me. Just as I am doing now, I looked up to you, in everything we did. You invented every game we played, I was just a kid. I see your sweet smile, still encouraging me some how. I looked up to you, in everything we did, just as I am doing now, As I look at the night sky, I see ecstasy that won’t compare to your grace. Through flashes of bright planets, I see your amazing face. You are in every wispy breeze, every moonbeam, every tear I cry. I see ecstasy that won’t compare to your grace, as I look at the night sky, With all the love in my heart, I wonder how can I carry on. I wish we were together again and I am glad all your pain is gone, My beautiful sister, wrap your wings around me so we won’t be apart. I wonder how I can carry on, with all the love in my heart.

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Date: 7/1/2024 7:57:00 AM
Heartiest congratulations on your win in my contest with this superb poem, SV. Great job!
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