Supernova In Forever

I asked
that you Press me,
between the pages of your love
and as you enfolded me 
in the volume
of your life

I asked, 
that you cherish me
holding me 
in the crook of your heart
just a moment 

you did,
now I burn

A supernova 
forever
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Dietrich Avatar
October 11, 2010 at 9:42 PM
wow, this is so beautiful, Jayne, Forever love!!
Chappell Avatar
October 11, 2010 at 5:21 AM
love this peace my friend thank you [duncan]
Buggs Avatar
October 10, 2010 at 6:01 PM
Beautiful poem.I really enjoyed reading this.Very interesting free write.Love,Jamecia
Murphy Avatar
October 10, 2010 at 11:39 AM
very good write enjoyed thanks for your kind great weekend faleshia comments hope you are having a
Freeman Avatar
October 10, 2010 at 7:48 AM
Unique thought for a free verse, Jayne. Agape, Moses
Mehta Avatar
October 9, 2010 at 8:29 AM
A very very fantastic metophorical write on Supernova, Jayne
Devonshire Avatar
October 9, 2010 at 6:37 AM
What a lovely romantic poem, Jayne. I love the last verse! Great metaphor. Love, Carolyn
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October 8, 2010 at 10:54 PM
Awesome, Jayne what a collage of forever. wow! enjoyed your poem,..p.d.
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