Supermoon Eclipse

Pink sky in the morning
Blue sky in the afternoon kiss
Another golden sunrise
Beautiful supermoon eclipse





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29th September 2015
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For The Contest 
Eve Roper
10-27-2015
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Rigoler Avatar
October 11, 2015 at 11:58 AM
If I may suggest an alternative rhyme scheme: Pink sky in the morning / Blue sky in the afternoon / Another golden sunrise / Beautiful eclipsed moon. Congratulations on your win. / M
Leake Avatar
October 12, 2015 at 1:23 AM
Thats an alternative maurice, I'll bear that in mind, but I did want the kiss in there!!! Thanks for the congrats and kind words Best Wishes Kevin
Dietrich Avatar
October 10, 2015 at 1:29 PM
beautiful poem!!
Leake Avatar
October 11, 2015 at 11:53 AM
Thanks Andrea, Glad you liked it!!! Best Wishes Kevin
A  Avatar
October 9, 2015 at 12:36 AM
Kevin, Congrats on your "Supermoon Eclipse win." Wuv **SKAT
Leake Avatar
October 9, 2015 at 2:42 AM
Thank you Skat, I appreciate the feed back God Bless Kevin
Kendrick Avatar
October 8, 2015 at 3:11 PM
Congrats on your great quatrain..Way to go!!! Eclipses are awesome because they are a wonder like your winning work..Sara
Leake Avatar
October 9, 2015 at 2:41 AM
Thank you Sara, I appreciate your lovely comment Best Wishes Kevin
Allison Avatar
October 7, 2015 at 3:43 PM
Dropping back with my congratulations Kevin:-) hugs Jan xx
Leake Avatar
October 8, 2015 at 2:37 AM
Congrats on your win too Jan, Thanks for the feedback!!! Best Wishes Kevin
Roper Avatar
October 7, 2015 at 3:32 PM
Kevin, thank you so very much for participating in my contest and big congratulations on your win. Eve
Leake Avatar
October 8, 2015 at 2:36 AM
Thank you Eve, And congratulations to all the winners ( I'm supermooned ) Best Wishes Kevin
Godwin Avatar
October 3, 2015 at 7:44 AM
This may be my favorite for the contest - very creative and expressive, plus you made me reflect and smile ... CayCay
Leake Avatar
October 3, 2015 at 12:54 PM
Thank you Caycay, I'm really glad you enjoyed this and thanks for read and lovely comment. Kevin
Van Breda Avatar
September 29, 2015 at 7:30 PM
Love it ! Pure and simple :) ~~X~~
Leake Avatar
September 30, 2015 at 1:04 AM
Thanks Kim, Glad you liked it!!! Best Wishes Kevin
Allison Avatar
September 29, 2015 at 9:29 AM
Beautiful imagery Kevin good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx
Leake Avatar
September 29, 2015 at 11:43 AM
Thank so much Jan' For the vote of confidence, much appreciated Best Wishes Kevin
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