Supermoon

Way up high appearing through mist and gloom our last time this year to experience from Earth this amazing special cold moon full of splendour, star of a difference, so clear, so bright, this spectacular sight our large friend full of beauty now to see gracefully hangs in the sky, such delight filling our mind with happiness and glee, looks so near yet it is so far away our precious moon that we take for granted creating brightness at night as if day feeling privileged honoured, enchanted, Rejoice this night our lovely supermoon shining through grey cloud, brightens misty gloom.

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Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 12/10/2017 2:39:00 PM

- The Moon has always been associated with superstition - Formerly, it was thought that insanity was caused by the full moon, and although today we know there is nothing in it ... the moon is still surrounded by mystery - A beautiful poem about the "Supermoon", Roy :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Roy Pett
Date: 12/10/2017 5:25:00 PM

Thank you so much for your very kind comment Anne-Lise, I think the moon holds many mysteries, thanks again for your support. :))

Sanket Jain

Date: 12/9/2017 8:10:00 PM

Theme is nicely chosen,so are words in your poem. Choice of words excellent. Use of imagesis good. Great. Beautiful poem expresses beautiful heart & poet. Review my poems 2 encourage my unique Pari Style

Roy Pett
Date: 12/10/2017 5:11:00 PM

Thank you very much for your very kind comment Sanket, so pleased you liked this sonnet, I have read some of your amazing monorhymes and will ensure to revisit your page soon. :))

Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 12/3/2017 10:25:00 PM

She's beautiful tonight :) lovely pen xomo!

Roy Pett
Date: 12/4/2017 4:23:00 AM

Thank you so much Maureen, her beauty was shrouded by thick cloud unfortunately, thanks again for your support really appreciated. :))

Susan Ashley

Date: 12/3/2017 10:06:00 PM

Roy, your write shines with a luminescence of appreciation for this lovely natural wonder. A beautifully expressed poem, vibrant imagery. Enjoyed!

Roy Pett
Date: 12/4/2017 4:17:00 AM

Thank you so much for your very kind comment Susan, unfortunately thick cloud cover made it impossible to see our moon, try again in January, thanks again for your support which is really appreciated. :))

Heidi Sands

Date: 12/3/2017 1:06:00 PM

A beautiful poem and full of appreciation. Very well done Roy! I enjoyed this today :)

Roy Pett
Date: 12/3/2017 4:19:00 PM

Thank you very much for your very kind comment Heidi, I have been waiting in anticipation for the cold moon tonight to be disappointed as there is so much cloud cover :)