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Superman

Cape, strength and the mask- of one in disguise 
dawn, the light shinning through- here in my world
Oh.. to see your identity- those eyes
Dodging everything at you being whirled

My Superman!! Defender of things right
Power, your ability to stand tall
here in my world, shining through, is your light
lift me where I belong-  above it all

A fairy-tail, a fantasy, some bliss
truth, somersaults- while flying out of sight
My hero- you are something just like this
Dodging everything, even Kryptonite

Cape, strength and the mask- of one in disguise
Oh.. to see your identity- those eyes


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      -  Just a little Scribble -


Songs ~ 
The Chainsmokers and Coldplay- Something Just Like This
3 Doors Down - Kryptonite

  ~ Superman unrolls, a suit before he lifts 
She said- “I’m not looking for somebody with some superhuman gifts” ~

Copyright © Brandy Nicole | Year Posted 2020

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Tom Woody Date: 9/17/2023 10:40:00 AM This was different for you. But still very much Brandy. Wanting to know the real person. Not wanting a superman, just a good man, a defender of what's right. A proponent of love Login to Reply Tom Woody Date: 9/17/2023 6:54:00 PM Way cool! Brandy Nicole Date: 9/17/2023 4:51:00 PM Yes, this is a little different than my normal writing, but still holds my signature within. You're exactly right, I'm looking for a good man, one that defends the truth. (I wrote this not long after I wrote, "My Faraway Friend.") Thanks for being a defender of what's right. :)

Running Wolves Date: 10/3/2020 7:39:00 PM I'll keep you by my side with my superhuman might.... Love that song and your poem..... Login to Reply Brandy Nicole Date: 10/3/2020 7:56:00 PM Smile. :) I am not going anywhere. Thank you Robert. There is something about that song- it is catchy. I love it too. Your thoughts are appreciated. :) Brandy

Gershon Wolf Date: 8/18/2020 3:03:00 PM Whoa! There I was looking for a picture of 'Superman,' and look what I got!! lol. (Her red 'cape' works for me...). At any rate, finding Superman is a whole different matter! That's a task for Lois Lane! Thanks, Brandy. :) gw Login to Reply Brandy Nicole Date: 8/18/2020 8:01:00 PM :) Smiling. I know, the title is a little misleading- but, not really. (The Red Cape she is wearing suits her I think) Using these song titles within was kinda fun. Yes, Superman is her Hero. Thank you Gershon. A little surprised to see your thoughts about this scribble of mine. :) Brandy

Paul Callus Date: 6/10/2020 5:43:00 AM Searching for a "superman" brings out the yearning of the child and grownup in you, Brandy. He need not be someone out of this world...probably he looks at you from the shadows...and smiles (at his wonderwoman!?) :) ~ Warm regards // paul Login to Reply Brandy Nicole Date: 6/10/2020 10:00:00 PM :) Smiling at you. The child in me shows. You see that and you can see the grownup too. Thank you Paul. So sweet of you to say, that he is out there somewhere, looking and smiling- at his Wonder Woman. :) You are so kind. My best to you. :) Brandy

Besma Riabi Dziri Date: 5/25/2020 10:24:00 AM You have a super imagination, dear Brandy! giving a super taste to your reader to relish in the charm of mystery! So creative and unique! A delight reading you! Warmest wishes. Regards and blessings. Login to Reply Brandy Nicole Date: 5/25/2020 9:34:00 PM Thank you Besma. So kind of you to say that I have a "Super Imagination" Your thoughts are always so beautiful and uplifting. You are appreciated. My best to you. Always. : ) Hugs, Brandy

Jennifer Proxenos Date: 5/22/2020 11:13:00 AM Totally awesome and amazing - a very different type of poem - you have a poetic flair that soars Brandy - Blessings my friend, keep safe, Jennifer. Login to Reply Brandy Nicole Date: 5/22/2020 6:48:00 PM Such a wonderful comment. It is good to be different. Thank you Jennifer. Your thoughts are appreciated. Many blessings to you. Hugs, Brandy

Harry Horsman Date: 5/21/2020 2:10:00 AM Your poetry, unmasked, is amazing. Login to Reply Brandy Nicole Date: 5/21/2020 3:10:00 PM "Unmasked and Amazing" Such a wonderful thing to say, about my poetry. Thank you Harry. Your thoughts humble me. ~ Brandy

Panagiota Romios Date: 5/20/2020 3:19:00 PM Very unique verse and meanings, Brandy! Really liked this. Panagiota xoxo Login to Reply Brandy Nicole Date: 5/20/2020 8:52:00 PM Thank you Panagiota! So sweet of you to say. I appreciate that very much. Your thoughts bring a smile. : ) Brandy

John Watt Date: 5/18/2020 10:09:00 PM Part of the appeal of a superhero is their inhuman power, and part is their tireless pursuit of justice. But let's face it, a big part is the mystery of who lives behind the mask! Very creative theme and another nicely rendered sonnet, dear Brandy! Login to Reply Brandy Nicole Date: 5/18/2020 11:19:00 PM Powers are not always visible, and that truly amazes me. Yes, we want to know who is behind the mask. To see our Hero. Sometimes, we just need to let them be the hero, without knowing their identity. Thank you John. Your kind words are appreciated. : ) Brandy

Regina Mcintosh Date: 5/18/2020 8:08:00 PM Enjoyed, dear friend. Such a charming and lovely write. Keep it up. God bless you and love to you, Gina Login to Reply Brandy Nicole Date: 5/18/2020 8:47:00 PM Thank you Regina. You and your thoughts are appreciated. Many wonderful blessings to you and lots of love. : ) Brandy

John Gondolf Date: 5/18/2020 6:36:00 PM Everybody deserves their own secret superhero, Brandy, yours is a lucky man. My superhero is just a fantasy. Enjoyed your scribble my dear friend. Hugs, John Login to Reply Brandy Nicole Date: 5/18/2020 7:35:00 PM Such a sweet thing to say. : ) A Superhero is someone just like this. Thank you John. You are a hero. And this is from the song below "A fairy-tail, a fantasy, some bliss" Even in a fantasy, a Superhero exists. My best to you. Hugs, Brandy

Joseph May Date: 5/18/2020 5:37:00 PM A super sonnet Brandy, best wishes Login to Reply Brandy Nicole Date: 5/18/2020 7:13:00 PM Thank you Joseph. : ) I like that. "A super sonnet" I am just lingering in moments, letting the words caress me. I appreciate you. : ) Brandy

Silent One Date: 5/18/2020 4:49:00 PM Are you talking about me? Lol... Sounds like a great guy... A mystery to all except you... Nice poem Brandy Login to Reply Brandy Nicole Date: 5/18/2020 7:02:00 PM Smiling at you. : ) Silent One. Actually, you are a Hero. It's not really a Mystery. I see many Superhero's around me. There is one that is in the shadows. I am sure you know who it is. Thank you for your kind words. : ) Brandy

Vijay Pandit Date: 5/18/2020 4:31:00 PM Enjoyed the ode to your hidden hero. There is something special about the superpower we are attracted to. Hold on to those fantasies, Brandy. Login to Reply Brandy Nicole Date: 5/18/2020 6:59:00 PM : ) I enjoyed creating this. Sometimes, a hero is right in front of you. They don't even know it. Superpowers- many mistake what a Superpower actually is. "I am looking for something just like this" Thank you Vijay. Your thoughts are appreciated. : ) Brandy