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Superior Itch

superior itch
must be scratched using a gun
insanity plea

Russell Sivey

Entrant into Gwendolen R.'s "A "Gun"-o-ku" contest

1/20/2013

lifehaiku

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Andrea Dietrich

February 26, 2013 at 4:36 PM

that last line is GREAT. Insanity plea. Yeah they always try to use that one, don't they? Congrats on this one, Russell.

Debra Falgout

February 26, 2013 at 2:58 PM

Congrats on your win Russell, have a blessed evening, debra

Kash Poet

February 26, 2013 at 10:34 AM

Congrats Russell!!This is an awesome write!

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

February 26, 2013 at 10:27 AM

Many congratulations on your number 1 Russell xx

Connie Gildersleeve

February 26, 2013 at 4:02 AM

Russell congratulation on your win. An excellent Hailku. Connie

Joyce Johnson

February 25, 2013 at 11:41 PM

This paints a very true picture with few words. congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce

Tahera Mannan

February 25, 2013 at 11:06 PM

Many congrats Russell for this well deserved win

Ray Dillard

February 25, 2013 at 9:25 PM

Nice job Russell! I wish we could find those with the itch in time to help us all! Well thought write here! RAY

Poet Destroyer A

February 25, 2013 at 9:04 PM

Russell, Congratulations with your winning poem in Rix's "A "Gun"-o-ku " contest. Goodnight~ LINDA

Gwendolen Song

February 25, 2013 at 8:24 PM

A psychological thriller is what this gun o ku is!! Great to read your work in my contest, Russell...congrats. Refer to my blog! Blessings to u and your family! gwendolen

Sara Kendrick

January 20, 2013 at 1:21 PM

I hope it is not loaded if you are scratching..Enjoyed reading..I got a chuckle...It may not have been meant to be funny though..Reads like winning material..Thanks for stopping by..Your visits are uplifting..Sara