Superhopeful

I gave him freedom
As You give it to me


"So If you have some interesting things going on
tell me about it
maybe some day I will like them too"


My breath 
did not 
come back 
to me
yet



somewhere in the middle of 2016



15.06.2016
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Scars Avatar
August 18, 2016 at 5:08 PM
WW, congrats on your well deserved top placement :)-luloo
Willow Avatar
August 19, 2016 at 2:00 AM
Thank you, Luloo!
Roper Avatar
August 18, 2016 at 3:06 PM
Congratulations on your win, Weeping Willow. Hugs Eve
Willow Avatar
August 18, 2016 at 3:50 PM
Thank to, that's great! :D
Day Avatar
June 25, 2016 at 9:08 AM
Enjoyed your thoughts - Nice spin on the contest and congrats on your 4th place win! Jesse
Willow Avatar
June 25, 2016 at 12:17 PM
Hi Jesse! Thank you!
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