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Superhero

Help me, I scream I thrash and shout Falling headfirst I need a superhero now They're getting louder Wrecking the metal I've sown If anyone can hear me I need a superhero The poison is spreading Polluting every vein I can find no elixir Superhero ease the pain They're overpowering me Locking me in fences Bottomless horrors Superhero stop the endless The rebellion has sparked Burning like a flame Burning away my flesh Superhero bring me rain Help me, please Don't make me shout Falling headfirst Superhero, I need you now

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 1/4/2012 11:17:00 AM

Congratulations on making it through the 1st round of PoetrySoup International Contest. Wishing you the best in the finals Carl. Love, Carol

Daver Austin

Date: 12/15/2011 3:24:00 PM

Shazaammm, and Leapin' lizards! Hope someone can help. Maybe you could hook up with Cat Woman - that would be nice. Congrats on the selection. daver

Aleksandra Ivanova

Date: 12/12/2011 10:59:00 PM

congradulations!! :) a very well written poem indeed :)

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 12/12/2011 7:41:00 AM

Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Carl. A well deserved feature. Love, Carol