Superficial Wounds

Never known such an obedient dog Our Annie, understands our human dialogue We often have to tell her “Stop biting”, she concurs The flesh wounds are usually superficial, thank God © Jack Ellison 2015
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Smith Avatar
October 23, 2015 at 1:20 PM
A nibble here a nibble there....playful pup has no fear....a nice long walk...you both can talk....just make sure your not still in your underwear
Ellison Avatar
October 23, 2015 at 5:28 PM
Like I told Carol, never known a doggie as sweet and obedient as our Annie!!!! WHOO HOOO!
Eastman Avatar
October 23, 2015 at 11:07 AM
Wow! Bad Doggie! Remember to lick the hand that feeds ya... That's a comment from our Dragon. HA!... Like Dragon would follow that Golden Rule (golden- get it) Naw!!!... That's like the pot calling the kettle black for shaw(trying to be fancy like Wulfnan)... At least they mean well and are loving, even with that flaw...
Ellison Avatar
October 23, 2015 at 5:26 PM
Annie is the sweetest doggie I've EVER known! So obedient... was only joking about the biting!!! xoxoxox
Konos Avatar
October 23, 2015 at 8:12 AM
You leading a dog's life? Awwwwwwwwww
Ellison Avatar
October 23, 2015 at 9:06 AM
Still the best doggie that ever there was!!!! A "golden" Golden!!! Love, Jack Ellison!!! xoxox
Allison Avatar
October 23, 2015 at 7:43 AM
ha ha ha you must make sure you tell her to SIT very clearly then Jack lol:-) hugs Jan
Ellison Avatar
October 23, 2015 at 9:05 AM
Is THAT all I have to do... gonna try it!!! LOL Love Jackson xxx
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