Supercalifragilicticexpialidocious

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Supercalifragiliticexpialodocious poetry contest Sponsored by Charles Messina 9 lines, 9 syllables each, last word 1-4, first word 5-8. Rhyme:Aabbccdde. must include: extraordinary, good, great, wonderful. Phew! ;)

Created by the great hands of God Upon this wonderful earth we trod Amazed by nature, yet we insist on paving the soil, building persist God gave us free will, talents, and smarts Trod not on extraordinary art insist on preserving beauty here Persist with this message, good and clear, The beauty of nature is God's gift.

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Tom Woody

Date: 3/29/2025 7:27:00 PM

There's a line in the song Rocky mountain high that this reminds me of, "...of the simple thing he cannot comprehend/why they try to tear the mountains down to bring in a couple more, more people, more scars upon the land." That's a pretty close quote anyway. In the new world to come balance will be restored! Nice one Crys

Crystol Woods
Date: 3/30/2025 6:16:00 AM

Great lyric quote! Even so come quickly Lord Jesus! Thanks Tom xo

Benjamin Bartley

Date: 3/29/2025 3:14:00 PM

Supercalafriggin awesome! Good luck!

Crystol Woods
Date: 3/30/2025 6:14:00 AM

Haha! Nice! Thank you so much! Xo