Notes About The Poem

This poem is about a 21 year old super model as seen through the lenses of the photographer.

Super Star

Camera engaging 
Strictly amazing 

Focusing bring it in.
Spinning grinning

Beautiful motions 
Black suede skin

Picturesque, patient, 
persevering persistently

Photogenic Super star
No scars 

Long limbs 
Black swan

Posing however delighted
Super star 
Touch the sky 
Excited

Clicking flicking whirling twirling 
Brand and smiling  styling.
Girl in, a world of her own 
Mystic bones

Her alone
Catwalk it 
The camera is her home

Personality astounding
Youngstar shinning brightly 
Defining

Attitude divining
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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A  Avatar
August 16, 2015 at 12:39 AM
Hi Val, Congratulations on having your poem featured on the soup's home page :). **SKAT**
Petersen Potter Avatar
February 18, 2015 at 11:49 PM
Nice pen Valerie! enjoyed your super star piece, dear friend. In his light! God bless you! I wish you a very lovely day! :) D."
Rogers Blk Panther Avatar
February 19, 2015 at 1:14 AM
Thank you Dorian for your critique. Have a great week. VB Rogers
A   Avatar
February 18, 2015 at 10:12 PM
ooo Is this about me... LOL... JK... delighted to read this my friend. "Girl in, a world of her own Mystic bones" fascinating line. :) you should make something like this your own form. Enjoyed stopping by this awesome rhyme-nation poem... LINDA
Rogers Blk Panther Avatar
February 18, 2015 at 11:39 PM
You're funny Linda. All poems are of fictitious people. Thanks for your compliment, Linda.
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