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Super Silly Us

I stand accused of a deep-rooted narrowness, a blatant superciliousness. I admit I can be quite silly at times but nothing that could be contrived as “super silly”. I view the “world” with a jaundiced eye as it is filtered through my experiences, scraped of its barnacles by my dreams, polished on my outlandish hopes. All that I know, all that I do is tinted, not tainted, by who I was. It has been refined polished by who I am. ©6/21/2021 Jaundiced Eye Poetry Contest

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Date: 6/24/2021 9:52:00 AM
Wonderful word play in title, sir. Also, clever play on "tinted" and "tainted." / Maurice
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Date: 6/21/2021 8:27:00 PM
'Tinted, not tainted' -- really rings sweetly, John. Love it. ~ gw
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Date: 6/21/2021 10:51:00 AM
Wonderful entry for contest. Liked the last stanza. Learn from past, change and act wisely in future. Good message.
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Date: 6/21/2021 6:49:00 AM
Nicely penned, John. I love that last verse and can definitely relate.
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John Lawless
Date: 6/24/2021 6:24:00 AM
Yeah, Daniel, sorta the "too soon old, too late wise" proverb.

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