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Super Moon

A magical orange night-time orb 
The Super Moon was an awesome sight
A tangerine dream for all to share
It’s just a shame I slept through the night!

Written 3rd October 2015

Copyright © Nathan Bach | Year Posted 2015

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Andrea Dietrich

October 10, 2015 at 1:25 PM

you were like me, missing out. Dang!! well, congrats for your win in the contest.

October 9, 2015 at 12:35 AM

Hi Nathan, Congrats on your "Supermoon Eclipse win." Wuv **SKAT

October 8, 2015 at 3:14 PM

Congrats on your great quatrain..Way to go!!! Eclipses are awesome because they are a wonder like your winning work..Sara

October 8, 2015 at 3:20 PM

Thanks Sara, I've never written a quatrain before. In fact I'd never even heard of one! Nath:-)

October 7, 2015 at 3:42 PM

Oh Nathan such a shame you missed it - i ADORE your 3rd line it is delightful:-) hugs Jan xx 7

October 8, 2015 at 3:21 PM

Thanks Jan, I pinched the line from my Dad's favourite group, Tangerine Dream. Nath:-)

October 7, 2015 at 3:23 PM

Nathan, thank you so very much for participating in my contest and big congratulations on your win. Eve

October 8, 2015 at 3:28 PM

Great job for your very fist

October 8, 2015 at 3:18 PM

Thank you so much. I've never written a quatrain before. Nath:-)

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