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Super Jock

Winter has arrived with a freaking cold blast Could have been warned it's sure a jolt to our ass Wearing shorts and a tank top Woolies and tuques we now swap The top models for style and eloquence I surpass

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Date: 11/13/2017 8:19:00 AM
I always think Bronson when you say tuque//That mean looking guy wrote the book//On wearing the beanie//He wasn't a weenie//At least with his on-camera look. WHAT ABOUT YOUR SANTA HAT, S. JACK???
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Jack Ellison
Date: 11/13/2017 8:27:00 AM
Yah maybe it's freaking time... just yesterday it was summer! HAPPY HOLIDAYS!!!
Date: 11/13/2017 6:36:00 AM
I don't go for style, I go for comfort and personal appeal...if I like it I get it and wear it, if I don't and its the clever style nowadays, I don't get it if it's not to my liking! You have delivered a wonderful poem that states yo are within the styles nowadays...what is that exactly, I don't know what this style is? is it woolly socks, or is it beige dockers? I love your piece, what a fantastic write my friend, Great work!!
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Jack Ellison
Date: 11/13/2017 6:43:00 AM
Me too... never have nor could I afford to!!! Hope you day is a good one!!!

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